Really good one
That was a good story, and a good way to tell it. There isn't much to say after all those reviews. If you like dark stuff this is a must.
Yeah, this thing was completely stupid.. The story was just totally screwed up with the main guy being a total psycho. Yeah... wasn't good at all.
pretty damn good story, not good art but thats not important, if this woulda just been 0 killing 1's i woulda still loved it, damn good stuff
Obviously a lot of effort went into this, the way you told the story was excellent. I think the most distinguishing part of this film is the direction, plus the fact you've kept with it and created a fairly long, complete story in one animation.
It was interesting that a story filled with such horrible characters (Murderer/computer admin from hell, feeling-less cyber lady, adulterers) worked so well.
As people have said: the graphics weren't great, but keep drawing and I'm sure you'll find a style that works.
The music you chose was well suited, the sound effects were fine too.
The robot voice was suited to this film but I get the impression you would do a lot better if you had some voice talent at your disposable.
Keep up the great work!
Very very good.
Your story has a few holes but that doesnt matter because the overall feel to the story is what really mattered. I think your drawings went very well with your story and your style. Maybe a few technical improvements would make it better but nothing major, its very very good. I wouldnt change the character design, but maybe put in some frame by frame just to give it that edge that makes people think "wow this works very well with what he want to convey!" Great job. Make more submissions like this. It's important that teh people of newgrounds recognize this and realize originality is sooo wonderful and refreshing. Using sprites and using othe rpeople ideas does not show much creativity. I commend you and your work and I hope to see many more flashes from you in teh future.