distrubing, yet awsome movie
You have the ability to capture the human condition and express it on flash. I congratulate you. Great work
I have to do something to un-depress me now.
I was already feeling depressed, but NOW
good concept and story though! ;)
Something new for change
Hope to see more from you!
It's very nice to see that newgrounds isn't just about comic violence, and that good stories are being told. (If there were a 'story' category for marking, this would have gotten a 10 for that, there really should be one) While I think as a flash artist there is still room for you to improve, you told a captivating story, with good use of music to create a distinctive atmosphere. Well done, keep making more! Keep writing too, you have a lot of interesting and worthwhile ideas, just proofread your scripts for occasional gramatical errors :) . Overall, nice job.
Seriously fucking dark.
That has got to be the darkest thing I've seen on NG, and thats saying something. It has an excellent story, although it is not very clear on the first viewing, but I have seen it twice, and I think I get it. The only flaw was how Mary's brainwaves were d/led into a computer- suspension of disbelief required!
The music is excellent, very atmospheric, very dark, it fits perfectly. The sound effects were a bit cheesy, there is one sample that I have heard loads on NG, but it didn't detract from the story in any way.
At first I didn't like the computerised voice, they always sound cheesy and are hard to understand, but it was necessary here, it sounded good and was easy to understand.
Very dark, very cool.