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This is a dark thriller I've been working on for quite some time. It took me a long time to make so please watch it to the end.
I can't, I just can't
I'm sorry, but I just can't give this a good grade. If you really did spend so much time on this, then why didn't you spend just 15 minutes more to spell check it? And then send it to someone else to review it???? "oridenary"?? You've got to be kidding me. And I'm not too fond of using that voice either. It really killed the mood. Get voice actors, or use some good program to get a better voice.
It's good, for however young you may be, but definately not top50 of all time material. You had a great concept, but couldn't put it down right. You should do what I'm doing: get a mentor to help assist in most of the animation while you are the director. And for God's sake, have people review it before submitting, so that when you do, maybe someone will offer to do the voice. Oh yea, and spell check it too.
Um, I did spell ordinary correctly, just so you know.
the top 50 better brace itself!!!!
WOW what a flash!!! d00d this is awesome
Not bad, not great
The story was pretty cool, though it felt a little lame with the whole "transferred my brain to computer" thing.
You set the tone pretty well though. I voted a 3 for it.
Good: Good pacing and atmosphere throughout the story.
Bad: Graphics were only mediocre, everyone made the same noise as they died, the voice of the narrator could've been done better I thought.
That was snip snap fricken AWESOME!
That was a great movie. Nice weird twist at the end.Keep making that cool shite!
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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