Not too bad, but not exactly spectacular...
I actually enjoyed how you've tried to keep the story line interesting and add twists and nuances and a little bit of art into this flash. I personally didn't care much for the voice either... It's like Steven Hawkings reading something to you, that just doesn't do it for me. Maybe if you took out Mary's voice and just made her into a subtitle for a narrator would be more interesting.
I actually look forward to seeing more work from you, it can only get better.
That was fantastic. You are one great story teller. I loved that movie, keep up the good work.
I havent seen a plot this good since the real legend flash, I really like this one, maybe you could turn it into some sort of a series cuz this was truely great
That is one very disturbing movie.... well done, 5ed it cus something of thie calibre deserves it