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This is a dark thriller I've been working on for quite some time. It took me a long time to make so please watch it to the end.
wow........ very....... very moving..... yeah... good job. I need to take a few moments to think about what i just saw.
That was amazing, so deep. You have a great talent there keep up the great work. that was very original i loved it.
this was an incredible piece of work u made here. it was very thorough as well. continue doing these kind of flash animations.
Surprisingly... it great!
At first i was, well... skeptical. Your animation is no where near perfect, but that can always be worked on. Although your animation was not first class, your effort was shown and you did yourself proud.
The story was messed up, warped, odd, but amazingly creative. The movie was not my cup of tea, but i enjoyed it anyhow on the most part. It was not spectactacular, the plot was not well played out, but WAS well-thought out, so it made up for it.
I advice people to read the 'Read Me' at some point it gives you alot more respect for the animator, Mark. He really explains where he is coming from and the logic behind alot of confusing things in the movie.
However, even though reading the Read Me gained respect for you and helped me enjoy the movie even more... it really should not have been there. At some point in the movie this all should have become obvious and everything should have unraveled in front of my eyes, instead of me needing to have you explain it to me.
All in all... it was good... work on your animation and work on how you express the story so that viewers do not get so confused and have to read you explaining it all to them.
One thing you do not have to work on is suspence... i was intrigued and did not want to stop it. I had to watch the whole thing.
Well done... i am going to check out some of your other work.
K. Myst Williams
That was cool.
You should really become a writer. I bet you can kick stephen king's ass if you embrace your writing skills.
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