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Before anyone says anything, the animation isnt the greatest. I welcome all constructive critisizm, so please suggest any changes i should make. Enjoy =D
UPDATE: Spelling Errors fixed =D
This was definitely above average, but I found it lacking in a couple areas.
First, I want to talk about the grammar (*gasp* not the art!). I see in the comments that you fixed spelling errors, which is definitely a good step in becoming more acquainted with a professional style. However, that's as far as the praise can go in that direction, because the rest of the grammar was poor. Make sure to watch out where you put apostrophes, and be sure to capitalize correctly.
Now, what was good. Obviously, the humor was fantastic. The offbeat and almost immature mood that it created perfectly complemented the rather simple art. Put a little more time in your creations and you'll be well on your way!
the graphics are crude but the unique style inwhich you present it makes up for that. And i liked your crude humor, but some people may not like the large amount of curse words.
Not too bad, I suppose...
It ain't fantastic, but I've seen far worse, lol.
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not bad.. But it could of done with some voicing.......
Hehe... Teh Guy got pwned.. "z0rZ"
I would give joo 5.. But mI groundz gold limit iz up.. Sowwwwwy.
Fuck you. :)
Very original. pretty funny, too. I liked the old-movie style thing.. a little too much unnessecary cussing though.
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