NEAT FLASH BUT CONFUSING

PROS: I loved the raven. It was perfectly drawn. From the looks of it you gave him sort of a mysterious look too. The city background was also drawn well. Overall the graphics and animation in this flash were definitely the highlights.

CONS: The plot was very hard to follow. Not to mention it ended very abruptly with out anything happening in the first place. So I'm assuming the main character had a double-dream? I'm not sure.

OVERALL: You're character design is quite mysterious and original. The animation on that guys hand was creepy yet smooth to watch.
Overall if you had a good story going on with the raven and this dreaming fellow I would definitely rate it higher, but since it was hard to follow I didn't do so.

2.5/5

hehe

he dreamt that he was dreaming... lol.
well, it was short. doesnt look too bad.
graphics and animation seem ok. sound effects and music look quite good.
keep it up.
overall score: 5.5/10
(THE THUMB: slightly up)

ok

it was just a kids nightmare, a rather let down. i was expecting something good.

hmmmm....

looks like it will be a good one.

Well that was short

I'm taking it that it's a prologue or something. Anyway it was really good drawings and it was wierd which is in fashion nowadays.