Keep up the work:D
This may not be a bad movie:D
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(UPDATE!!!) click read more to see.
Dots: The Planetary War is a view into the struggle between many factions of small creatures called dots. The war has grown to the borders to the hando faction lately and the handos have retaliated by hiring an assasin known only as "The black ninja" to eliminate the opposing factions leaders. Only with faith and courage can he accomplish this task.
I have decided to make the series. The first epesode i will probably stick to melee weapons, but later i might add in bows and guns. I will also be redesigning the characters.(exept for black ninja! cuz hes cool). the episode will take a while to make with school and everything, but i will probably have it done in 2 weeks.
CONTEST!!!
If you think you have a good idea for an enemy, or enemy boss, send me a drawing of your character. you can put all kinds of accesories on it and even give it a weapon. You can sent me pics in the form of gif, jpgs,or anyking of picture format. You can also send an fla. Send it to my email. keeganinaustin@email.com
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I make animations (yet I haven't posted any on Newgrounds... they're too big) and am surprised at some of the reviews like 91Tapatio gave you. He's a moron. Good work and nice music.
Hotshot512 responds:
Thank you. Some people just have nothing better to do than write hate reviews and call things rip-offs, Glad to see someone else appreciate my work.
-Hotshot512
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when you make it, it will be good and i will be waiting
Hotshot512 responds:
yes, this preview only took my a little while to do so the final copy will be much better.. I plan to make this a series. I am still trying to figure out how to make less cluttered layers.
ripoff
ok this is a ripoff of that other madness rip-off with little dots like that...wtf
its been done so go home
A Series ? :)
Ok this will be MUCH better if you do a few things. Make weapons a little smaller (they are large part of screen atm), make the battles in the next episode more then just 1v2, and making the graphics a little better. sorry for being so judgmental but I am trying to help you improve. good job.
Hotshot512 responds:
Thanks for the review man. I always like to get some critisisim. I just thought i needed the weapons to be a bit bigger than what i origanally planned so they would stand out more. The lack of enemys was because i didnt want to spend too much time on something that might be blammed. I plan on holding a contest to have people draw what they think would be a good character for an enemy boss.
