Blam!

This was horrible. The intro alone; The intro dialogue was far too dramatic, then the scene of him handing the picture... ugh. The animation was bad, the voicing was horrible, and just dialogue man CMON!.

"Where can I get him"
"I forgot"
"OK..."

Come on? Who talks like that?

!!!

I happen to be in the Mafia and I take offence to your animation. We don't have bulky buzz-cut guys in tank tops leaving respected high-rank Mobster to. They'd have to hold it and stay as bodyguard. My name is also John (so is the target). Weird.

The animation was good but the person who died should have been a different gang... perhaps a Triad Overlord smuggling items? Usually once hitmen or mercanaries see "Mafia" in the contract they just leave and forget it.

-John

it was ok

kind of odd

Nice job!

I am writing from the perspective of seeing both films. I think you did a great job. Lately I have seen a lot of shit come into the portal and this is NOT shit.

Decent

It was okay.
The grammar at the start could use work.