First off you could of used a music track a bit more original. Hell, the entire thing could of been more original. I thought I was watching some goth/emo kids stupid home movie. If you loved her that much you could of put more time into it.
You my good sir have gold on your hands
This is a flash movie that could possibly go pretty far if you make the 1st episode anti-blammingly smashing!
Good use of the classics man.