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Toml Episode 5

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Heres number 5, I hope you enjoy it, you may have to turn your speakers. by the way, you will have to have seen at least episode 3&4 to understand, just search "toml". Episode 6 will be here soon.

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Well

I think the Marv Should be the molester who offerd the kid a ride in the first ome,any way,funney

what the hell was the last line??

i couldnt understand what he was saying! "E takes?" wtf!?
neways, this episode wasnt terrible, but it certainly wasnt good.
you still need to work on the graphics - mostly the detail on the characters. and definately stop using pictures for backgrounds.
sound quality is improving, and should keep on doing so.
but the main thing you need to work on is the plot. its not interesting at all, and all of the jokes' punch lines are bad.
overall score: 4/10
(THE THUMB: down)

leatherface-85 responds:

he says hey tikes

I cant believe this

this along with all the other ep has stayed on ? this is shitty!

man thats not bad

i think you have potentiol and the last guy was a dick so u dont need to take note of peoeplw when they say shit liek that it snot bad i thought it was funny how tehre were soo omany things u cant do around marv lol
not bad id liek to see osmthing else:)

ihave nothing to say

You get a one for effort but this sucks.

leatherface-85 responds:

k

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