Short, sweet, simple

Nothing wrong with it,but nothing to stand out.

uh that's a winner?

i see the effort.......but ya it was dumb.

LOLOLOL

Awesome

er, perhaps too short?

The story was just damn too short...it's alright if you take other peoples idea, but make sure you do it better than the person you got the idea from...erm, the drawing/graphic is just great, but there's still room for improvement

hmmm

cheap rip off the clock series??