I kind of halfed this one to its potental, i havent added music yet...so if its not blammed ill update it when im done.
... still waiting for more Stanly!
this wasn´t bad, but i loved stanly, so i searched a way to contact you, and as i couldn´t find it, i´m writing this review. Please contact me to pablopencha@hotmail bcause i want to talk with you.
good luck
Pencha
hey i got your message...ive posted the new stanly...hope you like it...you can contact on AIM... MadMcKage
Not bad.
But not great either. I like the scruffy style of the graphics, but the animation could be better. I could see a Pokemon style to the animation in the lipsynching and character movements, but, unfortunately, Pokemon animation is shite. Anyway, the story seems interesting, and I'd like to see more from you. One thing though: please get rid of that awful sound everytime a speech bubble comes up. It gets annoying.
sorry about the speach bubble, ill take that out the next time i work on this...hehe
Good pretty good
I see potential in you. Keep up the good work. Improve on these things
1. Music
2. voices
3. More fluid animation
4. LONGER
Good luck
This cartoon was just so great, for me to poop on!
I hate being forced to read, especialy when it is some uninspired fantasy, nerd story that could not be more unentertaining. Wait I just used two inverse adjectives in one sentence to describe this awful cartoon. I love Flash cartoons. They give nearly everyone the ability to be an artist. But my advice to anyone who post cartoons is to first ask themselves if the cartoon is in anyway entertaining. If not, keep working. Blam Blam.
its funny how some people will actually tear a cartton apart while others praise it. Im glad you responded, but next time give pointers and not hate messages, And another thing. What do you think a NERD really is? Some one who comes up with fantasy...that will sum up just about every person who animates on NG. Im sorry this peice didnt please you, but im still working on my flash skills, hopefully you will like my "stanly" series better. Im coming out with a fully animated freak cartoon...if your not that kind of person either, then i suggest you dont watch or review my work agin.
thanx
Though you can' tell from my scores i like it
It defenitly has alot of potential. The music would defenetly be a great add on and a voice over too which i would be glad to do for frre if you want. I hope to see this as a ng series to watch once you improve you flash skills just a bit. I like the fantasy story kinda reminds me of slayers. I would do what you did if i had the money for flash