Happy Clock Day 2004! (42)
First off, supercongrats on nabbing the daily 1st place on a day of 117 protects! That's just impressive as all get out in this day and age.
Secondly... I must praise you for creating such a wonderful noir feel with your viusals. From the constant rainfall (great blinds effect with the numerous windows from dark outside to slightly darker inside, BTW) to the dark shadows and wonderful shades of grey... to the nice, simple music and the good character design and everything... an excellent beginning to the flash.
Then comes the text message. It was certainly a good message, but I feel that perhaps you could have better integrated it into the wonderful visual flash you had going beforehand. Perhaps you or another clock delivering a speech? Or maybe you didn't want to have any voices. I dunno. Anyway, I just find myself wishing the first part had continued on, but if a message being delivered was the main goal of this flash, then it was a success. Bravo!
Happy Belated Clock Day 2004!