stick man lover

funny but crappy funny

yay

Well.......

Atleast the had faces and you tried.
Good luck

>:) more prey

bad me: ok first off, you need to look at possibly all of the tutorials on newgrounds before you even attempt flash ever again, i mean come on, mation tween are the easiest thing to do in flash, and you pulled them off terribly, i would go so far to say that that is the worst i have ever seen someone use motion tweens, if you put any effort into this, ill eat my own HOUSE whilst INSIDE it, in ONE mouthful, i would go far as to suggest that you turn of your computer, turn around and run, and never stop, just so i never see anything this terrible from you again.

good me: okay it needs alot of work,look at some tutorials, theres a whole section, work on the graphics, animation, erm crappyness and imrpove them all, try searching on google images to see what things actually look like, and when was the last time you saw a bullet go like this: ------------________---'''''''''? bullets tend to go in a straight line, remember that. oh, and please dont submit anything to the portal unless your SURE it is as good as most of the stuff on here, the portal is slowly filling up with crap, dont add to it :) and dont flame me, i gave you 2 different kinds of reply >:(

meh

the good:
at least they weren't 100% sticks. they had faces.

the bad:
well, the drawing was just terrible. then, you had no sound and no plot in your flash.

the ugly:
first of all, put sound in it. then, put more time in creating your characters. try to draw them with greter detail. you'll need a lot of improving in animating, too.

okay it needs work

You definitely mastered the motion tween. Now you need to try and draw the characters with a little more detail. Try and animate the body parts by putting each body part in separate layers. And from there you can really make quite an improvement. Adding sound would be a nice thing to do.