Im a good fan of your flash.
Im a good fan of all you flash, and I thought that this one seemd to be one of your first. But good job, I thought that it was pretty good all together.
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My very first 'professional" animation. It doesnt look like poop, but it doesnt do anythign amazing.
Hmm...
Not so bad, but, needs to be longer, larger screen, a PLAY button, and some real jokes and some real fights. Keep trying. Oh and I never submit my flash to NG because it is not for amateurs or beginners, nothing personal.
Bw24 responds:
S'cool. I hadnt done any animating in a long time so this was a warm up I thought folks would find somewhat enjoyable. Still working on getting used to action script as I havent used it much.
Didnt know folks hated mario so much. Actually when I make my sprites I draw them all by mouse. That sound unusual? Hope not.
Not pacey enough.
This movie lacked pace, and there were big silent gaps. You should speed it up a little, and maybe add some voices. I'm not a fan of turn-based RPG's anyway, so I was never going to love this.
You know an ending would have been good
I really don't know what to make of it, so I'll let you away with a warning, script and storyboard your idea's it will pay off trust me..
hehe...
U know, i kinda liked it. Everything was OK, but the screen size was pretty small... :/
I think i just will vote 5 because i am feeling generous today! :)
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