Abby is summoned by her nursery teacher Ms. Mutton. Good Gravy Gasp-bottoms!What could it be about?! Find out in, hopefully, my first newgrounds submission that doesn't get blammed after 10 minutes:
ABBY in POLITICS
Right. This is the first part of a short cartoon starring my character, Abby.
The reason I've decided to release what I've done so far is for a couple of reasons:
1) To prove I'm actually doing SOMETHING on this
2) This is really sloppy. I want a chance to revamp the animation, graphics, voices...everything really. The next part should be something I can really be proud of.
The original Abby comic is at [link] although the 'toon is pretty self-explanatory.
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Cool
Cute drawings - the voices need work cuz they're a little bit scratchy (good audio program can fix that right up) - the picture representations were cute till you get everything finished unless you are planning on keeping the pictures in always which would still be fine cuz they were funny. I love when she flies at her teacher with a sword, that was awesome. Polish it up and keep em coming.
doesnt look too bad
seems alright, it does. the content was pretty funny, but there were some aspects that could use a bit of work.
graphics - overall, i liked the graphics, but i'd strongly suggest you stop using real pictures, as they can totally ruine movies if they're used too much... try to draw little Tim being pushed into the mud XD hahah.
sound - wasnt too bad, but the old womans voice sounded a little bit doddgey, and i think you should invest in a better microphone, or just stop breathing into it as you talk, lol.
so overall, the movie seemed pretty good, but it also could have used some work.
overall score: 5.5/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
i liked the preloader
yeah the preloader thing was funny. the graphics in the movie could use a little bit of work same with the sound, but overall it was a good movie
Pretty Good
It was hard to understand what they were saying because of the sound quality. However I did like shocking Timmy. Plus when she says "Nate" it shows Jack Nicholson as the Joker. THAT part I liked.
So...
Where are the polotics? Her not killer her teacher so she can see her mom again, isnt exactally what i would call politics. The voices were out of sync near the end i think...otherwise alright.
Well, this Is only the first installment. The Politics comes later.