lack of substance
there was no feeling or substance to this the music was bad, the animation, what little there, was not that great. the only thing that tied it together was the style, and style with out substance is crap. keep trying
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I made this in High School, thought I should submit it... *shrug* hope you guys like it.
true subtle actions reveal the true humor
enjoyable; subtle emotions conveyed with simple lines -- humorous actions, humours situation, humorous music, humorous opening. ENJOY
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Not the greatest
There were a few things that could've used work, but I did like the simplicity of the art.
err it was ok
it was ok, only good part in animation was when the sign zoomed in...other then that, it was ok.