Looking interesting, but not that much.

so many flashs of whit mario sprites is what we need, but we need a new type of storyline, like what just happened when in the old days super mario RPG appeared. Sad but true, altough your story was not based on adventure of 'em, this was like vgdc flash of rotmk, anyway my vote will be fair an i wish that your flash keep alive. good luck

very unoriginal

I'm tired of these fanfiction thingies! Can't people make up their own stuff?! All you did was move around a bunch of drawings that you didn't even make! Sad.

Jim Crapworthy it is.

Your back ground sucked, because you didn't have any, You're cheap, and I know what you did with the cat that time you got really horny.

That's no excuse you cheap shit!

ok...

it could have used some fine tuning, but it wasnt bad. i havent heard the SSBM music in a cartoon (before this)

not bad..

Not as polished as some other sprite movies, but still good. Keep at it.