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you get a 7 cause its good you do need work like better music but your doing good
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Hey, this is my 4th newgrounds release i did on my own, 7th all together, its all FBF, so it took a LONG time, it took me about a week and a half to actually get around to finishing it, im going to make it into a series if this gets past, and make future episodes longer, and funnier, the story line is this so far...
Oz Mafia is about a guy name oz who is in a mafia, called oz mafia, (ha) and hes the only one in it. he goes around and kills people that he doesnt like for stuff like taking his toaster, and for no reason, his friends are Patate and Tamate, last name Toe, they did not apear in todays episode, but will in episode two, enjoy :)
SwitchBladeClock responds:
thx :)
Could be better
I like the graphics, they were outstanding, I also liked the character design, it was unique and original. Music was a bit repetitive, needs more variety. Try to incorperate some speech with sound into your next one to tell whats going on a little more. Needs work in that department.
Nevertheless, great job! See you in the BBS!
SwitchBladeClock responds:
kool thx, i know what you mean, future episodes are going to be MUCH better, thanks very much
It's good, but there is room for improvement.
I like the graphics, and the character design is good and interesting. Music was a bit repetitive. Try to incorperate some speech with sound into your next one to tell whats going on a little more. I think the future of the series has front page potential. I gave you a five for protection. Keep up the good work!
SwitchBladeClock responds:
very helpful review :D thx, ok, this is more of a episode to welcome you to him, and some stuff that he does, but im going to try to do everything you said there, but voices might be hard.