ummmmm...
ok then make a sequal
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My second movie ever. i hope u like it. OK if i spell something wrong im sorry. next time ill have some one to look over it. this is the first time i ever used offects and ill stop with the hand drwawn stuff. I dont speak right som much because my grampa cant. OK i hanged with my grampa when i was small so i dont peak so goo bacause i hanged around people who couldnt speak as good. ( hes pure mexican and i dont speak spanish weird( that is why i may have spelling mistakes. I axedently put jews enstead of jewls. sorry
I got carried away.
I got carried away because of the graphics. They look cool. That's why I didn't know the plot of the story. I'll give you a 7.
Not so bad.
Not bad, but please, don't draw anymore with your hands!
Not too bad
Not bad, the spelling isn't horrible, the ending was pretty lame though. I hope you will have a continuation of this. Overall, not bad!
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I think you need it to be more exciting, and correct your spelling. Thats all I think is wrong with it. Otherwise not bad.