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Ok, here's where I need your help viewers. I'm having a debate with myself over whether to make this into a series or not. NOt it all depends on what YOU guys think of it, if you guys think its crappy, then I wont make it a series, but if you guys like it, even just a bit, then I'll make it a series. Thanks a lot!

Oh and uhh...the cartoon is too easy to explain.

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Wondering

I am a beginer like u and i was wondering how u get your characters to slide and not have to take frame after frame? please help me, and i kno this isnt a review but i would really appreciate it.

Go on make a series.

nuff said

I wanna cry

That really blew.... i woulda preferred a stick animation... wtf was this? oval world? do us all a favor and quit flash

Series

it was good you could make a series but try to get more of a plot

sheepo responds:

Thaks man! I'll workon plot ideas!

Eh?

You could do a lot better, but this was an excellent sophomore effort. The thing is that it was pretty forgettable, and uninteresting. The graphics were monotonous and bland. The character designs, were pretty bad, and during that fight scene with the pink girl and the guy, i didn't realise that they were fighting until he showed up with bruises. *i kinda thought they were making out* The thing is, is that there needs to be detail, everything we saw was just a background slapped together with large bubbles bouncing around. However, your animation was smooth - something that other amateurs will never get... - and your mouths were in sync with what was being subtitled.
But above all effort is needed, ideas are needed, and experience is needed. However, your work shows future, and i hope i'll see your work mature...

sheepo responds:

Thanks for the critisism. Its what I need to hear; I want to know what I'm doing wrong and fix those flaws. By the way, I'm not seeing any animation submitted by you, and yet you sound like you knwo what your doing. Why is that? Not like I'm making fu of you or anything, its just you sound like your somewhat of a professional. Then again, mkaybe you have more than one account I dunno. ANyays thanks again

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Uploaded
Jul 26, 2004
2:31 AM EDT