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i hope you guys like my newest flash,its most DEFINATLY my best work
its about a two men (one that you never see) pulling off a heist...
thats all ill tell you, NOW GO WATCH IT!
p.s sooo sorry about the file size, i really wanted to get it under 1mb oh well you have the time!

WHOA! its 5AM and im going to bed...

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Decent Flash.

Nice rhythm overall and your sketchy red-on-black art style is appropriate if a little unrefined. You could probably benefit from making a strong storyboard or outline before even opening Flash and trying to stick to it as much as possible. Also watch your musical transitions, they're a bit jarring. I liked the part where he flipped backwards over the cop car and shot through the windshield in slow-motion, very imaginative! I was sad to see the bike (R6?) get trashed, though.

You have talent. You should keep refining it.

Highs and lows.

Really good movie, even though I had a couple of things to gripe about. First off, the red on black style worked really well but the characters had a goofy look to them and I didn't like the way they were animated either. The backgrounds were good enough, but more detail could have been added. Great choice in music, especially with East Hastings (GYBE!), but now I definitely think that you should consider adding voices to your flashes. Also, some of the sound effects didn't fit that well and weren't timed right. Your flash was good in that it was fairly easy to follow and overall it was pretty entertaining. Everything seemed to flow well, and on top of that it was a good length. The ending was really good too, except that the moon looked like a bad bowling ball haha.

Later Jeremy,
-Nick (Illustrated)

that was pretty cool

i liked the ending a lot. it had a verey cinimatic and dramatic feel to it with the music. the movie as a whole tho was a little bit jumpy with the short chapters. the movie was still well done. hope to see heist II soon.

Unvelivable, in the bad way

First, his legs would be toothpicks after the fall, second the cars roof would have given in, third everything else is good except for the end...

not bad

well, the start of the movie didnt impress me much,m but once if got further in, i liked it a lot. nice recovery.

Credits & Info

3.55 / 5.00

Jul 25, 2004
8:05 AM EDT