EDIT [Nov. 26; 10:24 PM]: Hmm... Seems that this isn't as crappy as I thought when compared to other newgrounds submissions (that's what I'm hearing in reviews anyway). But, I still think it's pretty bad compared to my other work, which is on my site. It's not flash, so you can't find it on newgrounds. Maybe I will do another one of these in Flash sometime in the future... Maybe not. But thanks for the support!
My friends talked me into uploading this part of a miniseries that I rarely update. I think it is garbage as it was my first try and music and sound effects. I did a horrible job but my friends said I should submit this here. So before anyone wants to flame me for this sucking, remember that I already know. There's no need for you to be a jerk about it.
Crap.
Text boxes were up for far to long, the length of time for them was incredibly inconsistent, the sprites moved to slowly and erratically (try looping next time), the one joke you had was overused, there was no plot, and how the **** does kirby relate to or transform into Yoshi?
I might be less harsh if you don't review GOOD movies and tell them they suck.
Good movies? Good is only a matter of opinion. If I didn't like a movie, I'm not going to lie and say it was good just because of it's score. Any credibility you had with me as a review is lost because of that statement, but allow me to ruin some of your "points" so everyone can see how pathetic you are.
In regards to the text boxes, not everyone reads as fast as you do. Better to have them up too long for fast readers than to make slow readers have to watch it 2-3 times in order to get everything. The world doesn't revolve around you, and neither does this flash. Get over yourself.
And obviously, you didn't even pay attention. Since when is Kirby yellow and Yoshi black? But I shouldn't yell at you, right? Your "custom" Zero in a cloak and pimp hat shooting fire out of his hand animation is far more original than parodies of Yoshi and Kirby.
And no plot? It's part of a series you dolt. A series that you won't see the rest of because I don't have time to teach you how to copy and paste a URL into your browser's address window and make it load.
I might be less harsh if you weren't such an idiot.
((( CUTE )))
This was cute, and neat, first of all very good looking sprites very sharp looking, i could make a few suggestions on how to improve and that would be make the "WINDOW" size much larger because it was hard to see what was being said, aswell as with what was going on the screen, good sprite flash though...
~X~
Thanks. If I ever get around to making another flash movie, I'll keep the window size in mind.
that was great
that was awsome and i really liked it, the sprites ran very smoothly and i thought it was funny when the character was asking questions to that lady, because most of the time when im playing pokemon i get lost and i try and ask people stuff to see if they help but they dont and they just say stupid crap, and the fight scene at the end wasnt what i would call exciting but it was fun to watch, any way i hope you make more some day
Thanks, but I won't be making more of these. Like you said yourself, the battle wasn't exciting, and this is a roadblock that I cannot overcome.
Nothing wrong with short...^^;
I'm tired of pointless movies that go on for 10 minutes only to find out they had nothing in them worth watching. I really enjoyed your flash here. Yes, it was short, but it had it's moments and I found it pretty humorous at these points. Good work here. (You should post some of your 'better' work on newgrounds) Let us take a moment now, to reflect now on the legend we call of yoshemon... *camera pans across the sunsetting sky*
Legend huh? Thanks. And I will post some better work, when I have some. I do have other flash comics on my site, but the style they are in gets them blammed. People don't seem to like pushing a button and seeing a new panel. They want animation, so I will try to bring them some.
hoo-sha, dude
you seriously think this is a piece of crap??? Did you even SEE the other sprite-based movies on this site???
a great movie for a beginner. keep it up.
MY advice: if you have a flash movie, finish it, and hate it, send it anyways! nobody will know who you are... "ahh everyone is going rushing to some stupid little town in the suburbs to make fun of some kid 'cause he made a cartoon that wasn't as good as theirs"
get real, dude. if you make flash be proud, don't let other people get in your way of greatness
P.S. im giving you a good rating compared to most peoples. I normally HATE sprite based toons unless their like one of the 8-bit thing-a-majiggers
Whoa. I don't know how you found it after all this time, but thanks for the compliments. I still do think this is crap compared to my other work, but compared to other things on newgrounds... Well, I've been here a little while now, and I see that my Yoshemon is pretty damn good compared to some of that crap. So, thanks again!