Very good
I hope you continue with the series. =)
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my 2nd animation, i finally figured out the tweening, it took me about 3 days. the music is from an anime called NARUTO. I hope i get some good feedback on whether i should continue this and improve the fight scenes and stuff. this is my 2nd flash animation and so i may not be as polished as the other animators but i am trying harder. I loved doing this and hope you enjoy it. By the way, i created the graphics in flash and made them movie clips; each part is moving to add to more realism causing the animation to slow and get off timing so if ouy right click on the movie in the load screen and choose low quality,hopeflly you will get the best effect of it. Trust me! i don't care if your computer is the fastest in the world, just lower the quality. also please don't rate others as for myself without thinking that these people took the time and effort to try to entertain you for free, try to be a little more sensitive and give a little credit to them. SOME people don't have the equipment or skills yet but if we encourage them and give them advice, then maybe you will see better animations because we don't know what we are missing. ENOUGH WITH THE LECTURE! ENJOY! or be blind!
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
why do all these people have to write shitty reviews it wasnt the best but you did ur best
oh and that slow-mo part was to long i started laughing
anyways its a lil rough around the edges but i liked it
oh and i made 3 flashes all readdy but since there not that good i guess im not puting them on NG only because a wack of people are gonna insult me
ok im done :'( :D
so, HO !
well technicly this was very very very very very very bad.
he moved his feet yet he was not moving.
and the smoke effect did nothing it was just a plain peace of....
well it was not very good.Also this was too steriotipical I mean he has huge muscles yet he looks like he has the brain of a banana.
and when he brethed his armor expanded I mean the only metal that can expand is stainless steel, and it has to be at 400 hundred degrees to doo so, so basicly his armor is made of rubber , thight ?
and his hair moved like there was anty gravity
this was so bad il vote every day if I have too to balm this, I bet the music is not even lisensed(from naruto)
il vote a 0 out of 5
Yarrr ok Im gonna help you tweak this
Ok...what the hell is with the SLOW animation? I finshed my soda before it even loaded! And its full of matrix....use matrix when there is friggin action,no better words EXCITING CONFLICT. Ok? You dont need to do vibrations of OMGFWE a hand!!! A shuriken is fine but summoning a friggin sword that took 1/4 of the flash? And make some conflict on the way...and whats with that red head dude running freaking slow 1/3 of the show...everything else to your matrix. the music was faster too animation and music really need to fix together. And that crap with at lazy black dude he look like the sky to me All I saw was eyes ....no motivation of seeing what kinda gear he has on, if you did that to the red dude do it to the shadow thigy!
doode...
where's your originality? it still looks the same.. i mean.. i GUESS you tweened it, a bit... ; P
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