This isnt bad, the only notable flaw is the horrendous sound quality.
The dialogue was good though, there was nothing wrong with the plot, or graphics, the flash itself is a-ok, excluding the awful sound. That needs some fixing up in my eyes.
it wasn't bad.
some of it was funny.
but Im not a fan of yours
For someone so young, i would say it is very good. Get a better mic, or use a better quality sound for your flashes, but apart from that it was good. Keep it up.
I liked it, but my one big complaint is fix the audio. It's horrible. Sounds like you read the lines through a megaphone, into a church, and recorded it onto a cheap cassette deck. But the dialogue was good. So an overall thumbs up.