Why kill Zero and X?
I'll be honest here: It wasn't bad. Besides a few grammatical and punctuation errors (Which are important if you're trying to tell a story), the storytelling was kinda forced. This is a comparatively long video, and yet almost none of it did anything for the story: Most of it was just the Mavericks beating people. I mean, after about 3 minutes, I was thinking to myself "Ok, I get it, humans suck and are completely useless." Basically, the beginning and the end are ok, but the entire middle of this was just...pointless.
Not so much. You did well with putting it together & all, but I do not particularly care for this. But that's just me.
One Last Breath Pal... One...Last...Breath BTW This Is Emotional Movie I Give Ya 8.5 For This One :)