much better than the prologe and your english was better.
could be better...
Its a good series but the the music annoys me and makes me not want to watch the rest... I didnt like the fact that the music suddenly stops and then switches to a different song..maybe you could fix that but other than that its very good
Ba da ba ba baaaa, Im lovin it
The series makes me tingle
...but it's hardly an anime
This is an interesting idea that will no doubt grow, and it uses many of the techniques of 24 (the show). It is very clever, but it doesnt have much substance quite yet.