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Well this is one of my best peices of work on Flash, and i am so proud of it. The people that influenced me to do it was my friend Allan and a few other people i dont want to name. Please leave your reviews!

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That was a well done serious flash, with some real meaning behind it. The tear falling from his face onto his piece of paper was good but i don't think you needed to do the second tear. The somber music was well selected. Overall a very sad little flash.

~H-J~

not bad, one of your better works

neat movie. a few things to work on though;
1: you could have done a little more portrayal of david's past
2: people generally suicide in a dive. that weird back-flop you made him do looked awkward
3: the way he wrote on that paper was weird

i like the psuedo-film effect you gave it. nice one! :)

JudgeDJ responds:

Umm... Thanks I guess Tie I mean liebe_macht_frei. :-P
Sorry about the back-flop, I seriously wasnt thinking about it when I did it. It makes perfect sence an I personaly think its better without a portrayal of his past... Anywho this submission is old and now im on a new one which I fell will never be finished but one day it will. Get ready for my Horror flash people you'll love it ;-D

wow

this was really good, good music, good story, good effects, good graphics, good everything bassically, but its got such a low score, this is really good, and deserves a 3 something at LEAST

It was ok

and i'm sorry about my review of bullied, and yes my flash did get blammed

Very real

This is one of the best flashes I have ever seen. It would be nice if this flash was in black and hite than color.

JudgeDJ responds:

Thanks a lot Dude!
Hmmm yeah i was trying to do the Black and white thing but it just did'nt work out!
Because i started to add colour and it did'nt look right in black and white!

Credits & Info

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Score
3.64 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 5, 2004
11:33 AM EDT