I love the death scenes in the movie, you can see the effort you made and that's the most important thing, of course, plus it's fun when you put the scene of the instructor.
I wish you had put the death of Kawada's girlfriend

funny

Perhaps the worst Madness video I've seen, which is sad because I absolutely adore Battle Royale. To improve this, you would have to make the motions a lot smoother, remove the annoying background music and in my opinion, cut it down to only the vital moments so it's not quite so long. I would also recommend removing the voice acting from the film, because frankly, it doesn't work in this kind of medium. Subtitles very well may.

well..

you have a great idea but the act sucks, work more on the movements

Not as bad as everyone says

OK the animation wasent perfect but its a lot better than most of the stuff on here i have seen worse. And the idea was good one way to shorten an epic movie down.

So good work keep it up.