Mmm...

Not bad, u can do it better, i know :)
A little simple... but i like it
good music...
but... you know... it's a little short
oh, the introduction XD
jaja, that was really good XD

Not too bad... but...

You know, it was kinda short, plain, and simple... what was there was decent, there just wasn't enough of it.

(:| ) <~~ Look an egg!

Greatness... pure talent... I like deviled eggs, I would like too see some deviled eggs in action, like at the salon, shopping, and battle to the death using numchucks and soooop'a cool ninja moves.... *CHOP* *CHOP*!
- Iscah
(Look an egg! (:> ) Such a happy fellow)

Pretty good! ^-^

Funny. And the graphics were good. And the music was interesting. Good job.

that one was a lot better

not bad still short though