Pretty darn good,
This was actually very impressive, but a little long to be just an introduction, don't you think?
I think you did an exceptional job with this! The sprites look great, the animation is smooth, your visual storytelling is excellent and you've got a well-timed pace throughout. I'm impressed!
You already know your weak spot is English (do you speak a Nordic language?) and I think it shows excellent initiative to look for help with it.
This is a slick project and I look forward to many more from you. Best of luck! Cheers!
That was pretty good, can't wait for the rest of it.
You could work on your grammer a bit but it's ain't that big a deal, 'bout the only gripe I got with this movie.
hurry up and make the rest of it. i cant wait to watch the rest.
Smooth animation and good sprite work.