Edbert and Otis ep. 6-10

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okay i have now submitted episode 6-10 of the series, for those who havent seen 1-5, you should probably watch them first. i have more episodes on my site (www.dwarfinator.tk)

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i can barley breath from laughing so hard! oh man, thats great. make more

very nice.

i liked it all, but the part with the anvils, and the part where the plane crashed near otis house, and then he goes ''phew'' and thenit fall,s lol, it was soooo fun! also, i liked the part where the otis is popped by a bird, again.. and he goes like crazy, while edbert goes ''HAHAHHAHAHAHA!'' very fun, keep it up.

Aside from the vocals, great

Well, this isn't your best piece - there is some good humour there, but when you take into account the way that the vocals seem to have been recorded too close to the mic, or too loud, you do lose something in the quality.

Some of the jokes you can see coming and as a result of this, it does make them funnier - kind of in the sense of watching a Road Runner & Wile. E. Coyote cartoon, where you can see that the plan will fail, but it's a case of working out the details.

I think that this piece could benefit from tidying up a little on the level of the animation, just to give the overall piece more impetus and a sense that there is some improvement to be made.

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DWARFINATORclock responds:

I intentionally made the sound and art as obnoxious as I could for the Edbert & Otis series. When I made the first episode I made it hoping it would anger people, however people ended up loving it and asking me to do more. Since people seemed to love the original recipe I figured I'd stick to it.

Thanks for reviewing my movie.

Needs better vocals

Some of the episodes are quite funny, especially when you always find new ways of delivering your running gags (birds shitting on everything, anvils, etc.).

The vocies are really annoying though, especially when there are statics sounds all over the place when Otis and Edbert talk. Well, if you don't want to change the voices because some people love that about the series then there's nothing I could do about it. But I still have to deduct some points for the low sound quality. :P

Also I think you should try to tidy up the graphics a bit. The bad graphics may be part of the series, but I still think they could be a tad bit better.

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Normally I hate this sort of this. Normally it's a pile of shit

But episode 8 was hilarious. If that one didnt exist I would of given u 8 and tried to blam u :).

Also, I normally hate this kind of humour, but u pulled it off well me thinks :).

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4.41 / 5.00

Jun 17, 2004
10:33 AM EDT
Comedy - Original