Ummm....

Good style, need alot of work on the sound overs and the camera work. Just not my kinda thing. Keep Trying.

this is crap

something thats verry easy to do en you made crap of it

okay...

what the shit?..i saw ya hand and this ent as good as knox or they guy who dus those blue clay guys

could be better.

but overall kinda bad...

Needs music

Well good idea but tell me y they got arrested and stick in some music..or some more lines maybe..other then that u did a good job