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This is my first episode of my on going series. This episode is just to show what it is all about. Also there is a story description. For other stuff visit Seeko Productions.
It was great.
It was pretty damm good by the way u asked me for a car breakdown sound fx i finished it just search for me in the audio portal.
I liked it.
It was good. Funny. I'm Nathan, the guy who's been emailing you, by the way. I gave it a five. :)
If you're only practicing, you should make small movies with a story or a lil something funny, it gets boring reviewing and watching movies that have nothing really.
A movie can be bad in quality as long as it has content, but this is just kind of boring, sorry to say it.
As of getting better: I'd work on those clunky animations and add a few Frames-by-Frames animations. Takes alot of time but it really must be done in almost every movie...
Keep up practicing but add something to crack up a smile next time :)
I appreciate the review. Just today I found out how to onion skin, so it'll make frame by frame animating easier. I keep learning more and more everyday. Thanks again for the review. :o)
This loser maybe a winner?
Since it's the early draft, first submission thing, I guess I can't be that harsh. Hopefully he has some better adventures in Florida.
Yeah, it is only my first submission. That flash was kind of a practice one because at first when I started that I had no clue what I was doing. The preloader page I fixed at the last moment and submitted it. By the way, the loser isn't a winner. He is my "supposedly" going to be soon uncle. It's all a true story what has happened over the two years that which he had moved down to Florida. Just keep your eyes open for the next episode. I promise that there will be a lot more animations and better graphics. Thanks for the review.
If you are some knid of retarted backwater autistic kid from a third world country, I apologize for the bad review. Other wise, next time you submit something, try and make sure it' level of entertainment is at least on par with the excitement of trying to sleep and ignore my gay roomates lovelife.
I am really sorry that my movie did not please you. You are just inconsiderate and self centered. Maybe if you would actually try to understand the whole point of my movie by reading the story description.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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