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Matters Of Cheese

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I made this short in the free trial preiod of flash mx 7. I know its short, it's only the first scene really, but it's a giggle to watch and i'd like to know if it's worth me continuing. Reviews and constructive criticism greatly appreciated, as well as any animation / audio tips.

Lets hope it doesn't get blammed!

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It had ok graphics

but quite frankly it wasn't long enough to be taken seriously. Generally, you don't want to submit one scene to be judged as a flash movie. :/

It was decent

but the length really killed it


Poor. Bad drawings, no point, and dodgy sound. Try harder next time.

Smooth but...

What the shit??
(in a good way)

Fresh and original.

The only thing I could reccomend (You'll never guess...) is to make it longer! Apart from that, I love the style of it and I find it fresh and original, something a little different in the portal. Keep it up, I'd love to discover the mysteries of the cheese boxes, and the hidden agenda of the mouse.

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3.36 / 5.00

May 26, 2004
1:08 PM EDT