It had ok graphics
but quite frankly it wasn't long enough to be taken seriously. Generally, you don't want to submit one scene to be judged as a flash movie. :/
Author Comments
I made this short in the free trial preiod of flash mx 7. I know its short, it's only the first scene really, but it's a giggle to watch and i'd like to know if it's worth me continuing. Reviews and constructive criticism greatly appreciated, as well as any animation / audio tips.
Lets hope it doesn't get blammed!
It was decent
but the length really killed it
2
Poor. Bad drawings, no point, and dodgy sound. Try harder next time.
Smooth but...
What the shit??
(in a good way)
Fresh and original.
The only thing I could reccomend (You'll never guess...) is to make it longer! Apart from that, I love the style of it and I find it fresh and original, something a little different in the portal. Keep it up, I'd love to discover the mysteries of the cheese boxes, and the hidden agenda of the mouse.