**This is a very short movie, but it wasn't intended to have story line. It's kind of an inside joke...so if you dont get it, you're on the outside! haha**
Hope you like it anyways! :)
Needs a hell of a lot of work
For such a short flash i was very disappointed, the artwork needed a lot more done to it, however the music was very good you have good taste. The storyline needs a bit more work however, with practise youll find itll just come to you. good luck!
((( OK )))
Well notbad, but could still use more work like detail and little effects here and there, the joke was ok but could be better...
JOKE: Joke was ok but i want more to laugh with...
DETAIL: Deatil and effects will make this alot better, but still ok...
Hope to see more soon, its not that bad, and nice file size...
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rawr
IF you pussy ass brown noseres think this is movie is bad i aught ta come over to your hosue and nock the fuck out of u jsut leave your naem adresse adn emaiol so i can kcik the hsit out of you nig-ger what
haha, ok, calm down now :)
You dont want to get banned do you?
But thanks for the support :D
it was ok
like i said. it was ok. kinda dumb but ok. my advice: take it off, work a bit harder on it(with better drawings and stuff.), re-submit it. but... ok... how could the drive not see the guys and how couldthe guy jump/fly up??? they "special"? and..... er.... ok. try my advice. ok? im not good at flash but at least try my advice.....
o...k... haha. Thanks... i guess. But.. The whole thing was an inside joke with my friend, as I said. But yeah, i'm working on a good game right now.
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