That's all? It's a shame because the graphics were actually very impressive for its time, and it looked like you had a good idea going. However, all it was was the beginning of using a lockpick, and the flash lasted all of five seconds. Had you had a finished product it clearly would have been well-received based on the bit that we get to see, but unfortunately that's not the case.
Needs more work
Could have been better if it was finished it has a good idea around it but needs more stuff and content, like more characters props scenes and so fourth, so work on the idea you have and work around it, keep trying and practicing and it will be pretty good i think.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as stated, you have an idea here now just add more effort all around that idea, much more content and so on, practice practice is always the best medicine in flash
an ok idea needs more effort though
Don't submit unfinished work
This really does take the piss out of the whole don't submit unfinished work thing, it's like 5 seconds long, it's some guy's face then a lock being picked, there's nothing to it, form the 5 seconds I saw it looks like the final version could have been a good flash movie, you shouldn't have bothered submitting this, you should have finished the movie and then submitted it.
This is the most stupid unfinished work thing I've ever seen.
ok i viewed this flash over 4 years ago.
I viewed this flash like 4 years ago. I am starting to think u might of died if u are still here at the least update it or something. I have been waiting 4 damn years come on.
finish it, it looks like it has potential.