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Whitmore the Toad Pirate3

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An enemy pirate is on his way,
But not to Whitmore's alarm or dismay,
With a Yo-Ho-Ho he'll brandish his sword,
Take a firm stance and thrust it towards,
Any fool who gets in his way,
Or Barrington 'coz he's a bit of a prat.

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Thjat was awesome

I think you should make more , but you killed off Whitmore... unless he can cut hisway out of that dragon type thing... lol...


EdibleCastle responds:

Nah, he's pretty much dead.


hmm

im not giving out all-tens scores but this one deserved it... good style...:)

and i'd like to congratulate the chorus who sang the songs and you for writing neat poems :)

(you will make more, right? :( )


EdibleCastle responds:

The whitmore songs are sung by me.


that was kinda creppy

the chapter change got annoying


EdibleCastle responds:

yeah well parts 1 and 2 operated in the same fashion... cant go changing something like that, u know.


Whitmore? You can't die, you just can't, Whitmore?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(was that overly dramatic?)


EdibleCastle responds:

pity eh?


Sweeeet!!

That's well animated, have great sounds and very funny!!


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Views
96,279
Votes
3,623
Score
3.92 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 21, 2004
5:31 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
  • Daily Feature May 22, 2004