ummm fucking sucks id have to say?

yaaaa not so good...

I dunno

It just needs some work, that's all.

It relates to my own life

that actually happened to me.

horrible

again...suxs....you really should just give up. Take more time to make it look better, have a better/more interesting topic, and just be all around better. you really should stop making submissions

((( OK )))

well abit plain, but it was ok, just needed some more effort and time in the making of it, but i like the idea you went with nice work, hope to see more soon...

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