Hmm

The poetry was alright, I gave you a bad vote because I thought it could have been better. Graphics were fine. If you haven't already, read some of the works of poet/cartoonist edward gorey. His morbid dry english sence of irony and his penchant for moral childrens tales would appeal to you.

awsome

all u need 2 do is get the sounsd up alittle

Morbid

I liked it, get your animations skills up and you will get on the front page in no time. Keep up the good work.

NOT BAD

THE POEM WAS VERY GOOD
NEXT TIME CAN U MAKE SOMETHIN WITH MORE BLOOD :))
BY THE WAY
WATS INTERACTIVITY

This was ok

better then i thought it would be. the poem was well writtin and went well with the story. The look on the kid tho, thats a couple of nightmares.