i like the way you think!
that was funny, and if you dont get the point behind it obviously you are really retarded. dude make more stuff!
Man thats some funny shit, I hope it stay's and doesn't get blammed.
What was there was pretty good, though you need to go someplace more with it. Have more than just the one dive... maybe he could try swimming next or something.
Yeah, but it was a short, it's supposed to be a small set up, with a single kicker. Think of it as a newspaper-comic. Three frames in a comic strip or 25 seconds of animation, same basic amount of humor.
its not a.k.a its,...
FYI which means For Your Information. aka is Also Known As. i'm pretty sure you know that. just felt like pointing out the error.
lol (there's another one). Yeah, I was pressed for time when I submitted it, and I just tried to get everything down as fast as possible. When I went back, I said to myself "also know as" really doesn't make sense there. Thanks for the pickup though.
it was very good. but it could use some color.