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EgoCity Chap I

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Updated again: I finally had the time to reply some of your reviews. Part two is now around 6 mins long & will be coming out around early May.

Updated: Wow I can't believe I got 3rd place. Thanx for all who supported me. I feel like talking in some freak'n Oscar lol.

Like always, I suck on the voices but this is the first part of my mind-exploding thing but before I do that, I've to do that boring main idea part.



i love phrozen flames rpg


you are the best falsh author of all time i will vote a 5 on this everyday and everyone of your flashes from now on

not fucken bad

i liked it a fricken lot, the part with the big lazer was cool and it was pretty well drawn. like u said the voices suck, u cant understand what the ppl r saying and the music is kinda loud. i had to turn my speakers way up to hear the ppl. other then that it rocks!!!!!!!!!!

So that's how the series started

Well at least this Chap portion of it. Wow i am amazed by the graphics that are in this series, and as i'll say in all my reviews of this series, the drawings of the people is forgivable thanks to everything else simply being beautifully done, especially all the lasers they just look so cool ^_^. Also it seems that you sir have one of the best musical tastes out there, because these songs always fit so well with what is happenind, and are simply just to cool :D. While on the sound subject, the voice-acting ugh its good i guess, and the dialogue helps push forward the story, but its so fast, and very hard to understand at time, but still really good. Also the originality of this movie, is simply great, neer seen anything quite like this and if i ever do i'll flag it for being stolen *thumbs up* just kidding, but seriously you have one creative mind, and that artistic genious suits you well. I love the explosions and physical humor throughtout this series it make it so entertaining, and keeps you glued to the screen (Twice my computer went into sleep because i was to busy watching this to remember that if i didn't use the computer it'd go on sleep and i'd miss something :_<) All the random jokes in the flash make that 10 for humor something that you definately earned ^_^. 10/10 overall and 5/5 from me on the score, also when i gave it a 5 i raised it .01 i believe :D. You and Chap III are already on my favs list, continue to make more of this series, unless III was the end of course :_< i hope it wasn't though. THE EDN

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LenZ responds:

thanks for the top scores & the reviews. Also Chap III isn't the last part of the story.

Know why I liked it?

1. Its by my best bud: Eugene
2. Because I did a voice in it. (and it does sound like a 9 year old i know. but im 12 and the person who did the girl was 14, but make fun of the guy who did the green haired guys voice. hes 10 or sumthing. I did the voice for MB the guy in the trench)
3. Because Im in it. (again, MB the guy with the trench coat)

SO...yeah...it was awesome. beyond belief...

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4.09 / 5.00

Apr 17, 2004
2:49 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place April 18, 2004