Good detail but a bit bland and long
I liked it on the whole but the continuous music and samey images kinda made it bland. Maybe you could have shortened each shot or something to make it more exciting.
THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO REVIEWED FOR THERE SUPPORT.ITS PEOPLE LIKE YOU THAT MAKE ME WANT TO ANIMATE.
MY filesize was extremly big so i had to make the photoshop effect quality look like crap.My intouched movie is on my deviantart account {go too my profile to get the link}.This is my second movie done so i hope you enjoy it.
From deep within my mind i conjured up this plot for the movie.It begins with a mental insititution where it then leads to a man.Entangled with his jacket we then begin to dive into his mind.there we see him stuck,imprisoned in his own mind.Then the man looks about and spots a door.The light from the cell window begins to reveal more of the door.Creeping to the top of the door the light spots the figure of man.Astonished,the imprisoned man runs quickly to the door.a momentary stare down ensues as the figure behinds the door pupils grow white as he sends the prisoner flying back and hitting the wall.The prisoner stumbles up and begins rubbing his injury as he looks up the figure of a man begins to fade away.Enraged by the attack and the self confinement of his own mind,The prisoner begins attacking the door.He begins to cry as whales out a tremendous scream.The prison begins to shake fiercely.As he stopped the door begins to become extremly bright as it quickly disappears leaving a new passage for the prisoner.He walks through the new entrance as the room grew pitch black.The prison he was once in was now nothing more then a mere memory.The dark room immediately becomes white as he ventures in the abiss of nothingness.He begins to sense the presense of some kind of entity.Behind him stood a man with strikingly simalar looks to that of his own.He had the same phisice, but his clothes were dark as his counterpart was white.The most definite difference was the mans eyes.He looked at the prisoner sinacally.He grined evilly at the prisoner as his pupils grew white.A vortex enshourded and began to suck up the light.The room grew,dark,cold, and errie once again.The evil man began to walk toward the poor tortured soul as he quickly vanished .He He reappeared right in front the prisoner.The man grined evilly as he then pulled out a key.Confused the prisoner looked at as then realized that the evil started to point at the sky.Though still dark,the prionser began to realize the man held the key to his own freedom...and his own demise.The prisoner begins to demand the key as the man ,yet again, grinned evilly.The prisoner had enough as he punches the evil man.The fight begins as the battle for sanity eruptes.....
Good detail but a bit bland and long
I liked it on the whole but the continuous music and samey images kinda made it bland. Maybe you could have shortened each shot or something to make it more exciting.
I liked it
This was a very good animation.
I gave a 9 on style because I do not think I have seen a style like yours before, especially with some of those screen effects you used.
the characters and the fight scene reminded me WAYYY too much of Dragon Ball Z though. especially near the end.
I didn't really like the song itself, but you conveyed the mood very well
Hey thanks alot.This is my favorite film because really makes you think.
not bad good job
Its a nice naritive the graphics got a little rough but good naritive do more.
Thank you very much.
Buh... Gah... Squee? Gug?
Holy Crap.
How long did you spend on this? This is masterwork!
Granted there were a few places where it fell apart and looked less clean (the fight scene looks a bit rigid) but... gah... o.o
Do more! ^_^
Thank you,yeah i had to rush through it,and I had to lower the quality of the special effects just to submit it to NG.
The unwatered down verison is here,
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/5948982/
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ey nice work, ireally love the music it was very meaningfull and set the tone for a balanced movie, it did kinda stop about halfway so you might want to add a loop or somthing good stuff keep it up...
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Thank you very much.Music stopped you say?It never happen to me or anyone else im aware of.Hmm,I'll look into it.Thanks for the review.
P.S. Aclockypse,I totally misunderstood what you said and im sorry.I feel like a douche now.