It was pretty good, your drawing is definitely up there with some of the better anime flash artists. I would reccomend a couple things however.
A) Add buttons, buttons are easy to program and are going to help you BIG time in the long run, just start by adding next buttons and a play button in the beggining.
B) Sound, the more senses you invoke the better your flash, adding buttons makes the viewer feel more connected to the flash and sound adds more fun to the process. Always go with songs that fit your flash well. (It can be anime songs just not the really high pitched girls singing them, just a thought :D)
C) I would consider, and only consider this because al styles are different, but I would suggest not using so many lines in the neck and making the eyebrows a little thinner. Only suggestions, you don't have to.
These are only suggestions but I still want to tell you what you have here is pretty good, put a little more effort into it and it will come out even better! ^__^
Now. I know that Anime is bloody difficult to draw...But i either couldnt read all the text in time...or there was too much time, that I went to the toilet and came back in time! If your gonna do a tutorial, learn how to make buttons first. That way its much mor enjoyable for the user, and they can take their time. But apart from that, I'd say that you put a lot of effort in this. Keep up the good work (Make a cartoon series using this idea?)
I don't know anything about how to draw in flash but from what I do know it can be difficult. Anime is difficult as it is to draw but to add the complications of flash on top of it shows how good a person is. I watch alot of anime and I don't think that the previous review was a fair judgement call on the drawings, and I don't think it helped for that person to make a judgement call on your ability to speak english. Not everyone is an english speaking person, ESPECIALLY on the internet. I think that the drawings were an excellent likeness of your own form of anime, and I like the examples used too. All around an excellent flash.
A great big no!
Wtf?! Your anatomy has improved slightly since the first one, but only very slightly, and your spelling has suffered severely. Please, don't try and teach people to draw when you aren't any good at it yourself...
not good and dude... its not a 'big bone in your neck' its called your adam's apple... and i hope you only draw it on guys.