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this is a cartoon I have been working on for the last few weeks. Leave any helpful feedback please.
DUDE! WAAAAY COOL!!!!!!!!!!
I saw your teaser for this and I'm glad you changed the music! It still has that country bumpkin feeling to it but with a much better pace. You have a fantastic opportunity here to create a well-loved series and I hope to see alot more from you. I'm still not sure about that Hampster's look, though. Overall, excellent job and I want you to know you made me laugh like a hyena after a really crappy day.
P.S. KEEP THE BLOOD! It put it just THAT much further over the top and gave my amusement a second wind. Peace out!!
good job dude
well its me again, told u id watch if u mad more and im sticking by that, i think ur work is great and im sure itll only improve over time. cant wait to see the next one.
The animations are in a basic stage, but I suppose they'll get better in time, but there's attention for minor detail, which is something generally overlooked in these Flashes. The story's funny and you've created a longing for more pet-fighting by introducing a promessing cast. I'll watch the next one.
That was actually good! I liked it a lot! The only complaints that come to mind are that the action seems a bit slow, and you really dont need blood in something like this. Also, it was a first episode, and a few of the characters in the beginning weren't introduced (I know they'll be in future episodes, but I'd take them out until they make an appearance, you know?). Otherwise, outstanding work! Love to see the next one!
Yeah this one was really short in episode 2 or 1.1 whicehever I decide I will make it a longer story on introduce all the characters. But thx a lot for the 4
Wasn't expecting this submission to be good, but it was. Keep it up, can't wait for episode 2.
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