Yeah this was really cool scared the crap out of me the first part where he had the flashback of the granny, the big man is cool. He seems like the kind of guy where he would help you out on matter what unless you hated or something, I mean "it touched me" also good job! =-)
Very serious if ya stretched it out you could make it a book o.O
My uncle is a lot shake or shape or whatever
this could bae a movie if it already isn't
is ther another part
is ther another part cuz that wuznt a very good ending but i liked it
dude... youre like .. the best !
just perfect !