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An old movie I had, it isn't finished yet though. Please give comments!

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Well i thought you were going to led to a new scene with banana clock taking on the lock legion but it just ended abruptly which was alittle disappointing. I think you did a good job of drawing the background of banana clocks room, the jokes were also quite good however it was alittle hard to hear orange clock so it may have been a good idea to have added subtitles and also you seem to be missing sound effects for the cutting and shooting of the clocks. Overall it seemed like an unfinished project to me.

~H-J~

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good movie considering some of the stuff surrounding it at this score. You had pretty good graphics, with good animations of the faces. The best part had to be the end when orange exploded, that was unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline was really strange in this movie. I'm not sure what the heck BananaClock was trying to accomplish. Kill the clocks? Infiltrate the locks? Kind of confusing.

Nice animation

You should've added sounds for some things,but it was an okay flash.Smooth animation,strange clock orange juice,raspberry,like killings.And a little touch of humor here and there.

cool

not bad, but i think you should;ve came up with a better name for this movie.
granted, i can see the humour in 'insert title here', but a good title of something wouldve been more appropriate

((( IT WAS OK )))

Well notbad, i love the backround detail, and even some of the effects like the gun, and the lightings, the robotic voices well they could use a change, and as for the story it was ok, could use more detail like get inside of the minds of a clock or lock, heh anyways kinda neat...

~X~

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Votes
23
Score
2.41 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 23, 2004
2:01 PM EST