Good but could be better
I love the Demons and Monsters in it but there are allot of Still Scenes that are like,,,, Pictures,,,, that have no action,,, but besides that,,, its good Story,,, and its another Great Chapter to the Big Dr. Shroud Book !
Glaring Problems Flaw Great Piece
Although you have a very proffessional and talents graphical style which is very refreshing on Newgrounds, your movies never seem to impress me. You have half of the work done as far as graphics, but I simply CANNOT follow this story, its totally out there. I think a better use of your talent could be made if you tried to stay on a more lifelike subject, and not some totally wierd science fictiony thing like this.
And as far as the important things go you seem to have everything down, but you totally drop the ball on certain things, such as sounds and details. For instance, I never knew tasers shot scribble, and that a person could make the same exact fuzzy mumble 5 times in a row. Im sorry but this was just ... bad. I couldn't bring myself to think of any redeeming qualities other than the Graphics, which often plague this as everyone seems to be moving in robot like paces, totally unfluid and strange.
In my opinion, you deserve to make better work. Goodluck.
What the hell was that???
It had to much talk in it.
A little better
This little story seems like it will be more entertaining than the Dolls one. Its in color, which is a plus... and its plot driven. So... not bad, I am sure they will improve as time goes on.
this guy looks like a rip off of the phantom
word of advice, the first series was ruined because you let the viewers vote.
you should take into consideration that some times people make really stupid decisons
overall good story, sounds are a bit annoying but still good