Keep it up.

We all know that this isn't your best work. We all know you can do better. Thats why I hope you can keep working on it and make it longer. You might find it will write itself.

I want you to know what i thought. What I think is that if you really put your mind to it you can get way better. I think that if you work on your sound levels you'll have a way easier time getiin sound effect that don't over do it on our speakers.

I have not watched you other stuff so it may be way better I'm just basing this reveiw on what I have seen so far. Good work and I hope maybe this can expand on itself and you can bring it to the next level.

ehh!

i hope you are not too proud of this, cus its nothing to be proud of

Sweet.

It was pretty cool, she looks really thin in the bathtub, no matter how it is, it's how it looks. And to the last reviewer, I have done very detailed things in flash... so yeah...
You style is definantly showing.

Not that great

Lemme point out the basic errors in the graphics...
The Animatrix, was much more detailed than this flash, and thus, if you want to have your flash taken seriously, you must make it detailed, drawing it in flash wont do, use one of those drawing pads and paintshop program, like Andrew West (Artist of "Broken Saints").

The scenes are a bit confusing, and the music is itchy. Try and make the actual storyline of the flash a little clearer. Other than that you have nice potential, and could become a nice anime artist, if you learn to draw better.

What...

I don't get it. And how is it different to the first. That cant have taken ages to change that little, can it?